A very unique art style, excellent animation, and an engaging story sets this short as one of the best I've seen on Newgrounds thus far.
A very unique art style, excellent animation, and an engaging story sets this short as one of the best I've seen on Newgrounds thus far.
One of my favorites from you so far. Solid animation, effective humor, and decent voice acting.
But you gave it a 4 </3
Not bad at all! Keep it up.
It has potential, however the short does contain a handful of small problems that effect the quality of this comedy.
Firstly, I think the animation is decent enough and the voice actors did a passable job along with the good audio quality. However, although this is the first episode of this possible mini-series, I think it would be beneficial if in Episode 2, the opening was a lot shorter namely that it takes up a good third of the episode and the credits takes up another. Dialogue, was also pretty forgettable for a comedy. That being said, I wish you the best of luck in future shorts and you do have potential to make something better.
Summarized:
+ Animation was decent.
+ Good Audio Quality.
+/- Voice Acting
- Opening/Ending was too long.
- The comedy lacks any noteworthy laughs.
- Ends alittle too soon, feels unfinished.
Thanks for the feedback, yeah, for future episodes I'm definitely gonna leave out the huge theme song. :) and this whole thing is based on some shirt comics I made like 5 years ago, I hadn't got into the 'swing' of things quite yet. So I'll try to make sure future ones have more laughs and quotable things. :)
Johnny Test: Series Finale. Cooke Jar Entertainment, made all the stops on this with high budget animation, state of the art vocal acting, and a plot so convolutedly-beautiful, that Johnny Test will forever remain in our hearts for many years to come.
The parody is spot on and hilariously fun.
Update: 05/09/21 - Years later I still love revisiting this.
This is the best review I've ever had on anything I've made. I thank you for that.
Good Job! The animation is starting to grow on me abit more, and it's still pretty fluid. Voice acting was pretty decent and audio quality is once again great. Keep it up!
The joke was alittle too simplistic, and the dialogue wasn't all to clever. The animation was passable, it's fluid but the character designs just look weird, but I suppose that's nitpicking. Aside from that, the voice acting was decent and the audio quality was pretty solid. I think you could have potential so long as you keep trying and working on the jokes. Keep Trying!
I’m not sure what kind of joke you were expecting, but I think this is one of those situations where “If you didn’t like it, then you didn’t get it.” I also can’t take you seriously about the character designs based on your avatar. I hope the voice acting was good considering I do all the characters. I’m glad you think I have potential. Gosh golly I hope I make it somewhere.
Oh I do miss Newgrounds... sarcasm sarcasm sarcasm.
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