DevvyBoyOllie's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pyromane]

Are you sure this is your first attempt? Because this is pretty great stuff! The animation is fluid, I personally really like the art style, and there was clearly some deep meaning about life. Not sure if it was what you were shooting for but the meaning I received from this was that you should burn anything that has a MOUTH on it. Overall, good job!

ZeTrystan responds:

Yup! But I look at a lot of animation trying to understand how they are made, I'm sure it helped! :) Anyway, thanks a lot!

And this is exactly the meaning hidden in there. Those things with mouths, HUH, to the stake I say!

[Street Fighter V DLC's]

Great one! Really loved the art style and voice acting on this one.

[Crash Zoom: Orcs n Dorks]

Very nice animation, voice acting, and all around just another great short!

[Spoiler]

The joke was acceptable, I think you could've done abit more with it. However, your animation is improving and the audio quality was fairly good. Keep it up!

Chauder responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Helpful :D

[BQ - Smash Quest!]

The animation is colorful, crisp, and character designs look good! Voice acting was a mixed bag, at times being excellent while at others being alittle forced, but an overall decent. As for the dialogue and jokes this time around, I had a few chuckles at the dialogue here and there. Overall, a pretty solid effort! Keep it up!!

[TUMOR: An Organic Glitch]

Well that was interesting! Now you have me curious about the upcoming parts, and how they will manage to piece this thing together.

ClockworkPixel responds:

be sure to check out newgrounds on friday then :D hopefully part 2 can keep you interested for part 3

[BQ - Nate Gets A Shield!]

The animation is crisp, well-drawn, and colorful. However, the dialogue is abit to juvenile constantly spitting out unfunny sex jokes that fail to bring in even a single chuckle throughout this short. Voice acting was also pretty wooden but not terrible. Overall, the short has potential although at it's current state, I'd say it's simply just watchable and nothing else.

BestQuest responds:

Appreciate the critique, we'll work on improving! Thanks for watching!

[SealSurfer Animation Test]

Not bad! I think with more time put into it you could have some pretty fluid animation overall.

BretLinne responds:

Thank you much. I believe this will come out nicely and will accent the title screen well.

[Just A Bit RealLife]

Can't really understand how it's a parody as the entire thing is merely a copy and paste of the original work only with your webcam frames in replacement. The frames are also pretty low quality, and overall this isn't new nor interesting. Not a very good start for your first submission.

maxdepier responds:

cause things aren't the same when the visual design changes , and you'r sorta right , it may not be a parody of Eddsworld but its a parody of animation itself , for when things get a more "real life" vibe , things can get a more weird or funny look , i'm interested in making it since really there is no one else who does the stuff i do ,
as for the low quality , i can't help it , i don't have the money to just buy a camera , and i'm not going to sit and do nothing , maybe one day in the future i'll get one...

[Little Parrot]

I would like to see more of your efforts. The animation looks pretty promising for a warm-up.