DevvyBoyOllie's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[AI - Johnny VS Spiders]

The joke was alittle too simplistic, and the dialogue wasn't all to clever. The animation was passable, it's fluid but the character designs just look weird, but I suppose that's nitpicking. Aside from that, the voice acting was decent and the audio quality was pretty solid. I think you could have potential so long as you keep trying and working on the jokes. Keep Trying!

scpgames responds:

I’m not sure what kind of joke you were expecting, but I think this is one of those situations where “If you didn’t like it, then you didn’t get it.” I also can’t take you seriously about the character designs based on your avatar. I hope the voice acting was good considering I do all the characters. I’m glad you think I have potential. Gosh golly I hope I make it somewhere.

Oh I do miss Newgrounds... sarcasm sarcasm sarcasm.

[Write in Time]

Excellent Flash! Jokes are solid, animation is nice and fluid, and voice acting is wonderfully well done! Keep it up!

WaldFlieger responds:

Hey, thanks a lot!! :D

[White Girl Foundation]

Okay! Next up on the list, well this wasn't as generic as the let's player short posted earlier. Animation is fine enough, audio's nice and clear, but the joke was just meh. I think that's really the only problem with your shorts, is that the joke or premise that's involved just never really comes off as very funny nor enjoyable. Now, its not terrible by any stretch again but I think you're capable of pulling off something alittle more hilarious than the obvious stereotypes.

Chauder responds:

yea, im gonna start working on my joke writing :)

[Mythical Pantaloons]

Nice animation, and a pretty funny setup overall! The voice acting was good, but the delivery got alittle shaky in a line or two. Other than that, Great Job!

Potatoman responds:

Thank-you thing i put in my martini

[No.]

Not bad for your second submission. The animation is very simple, and the plotline isn't anything I haven't seen before. However, the added lighting and tiny bloom likes effects were pretty nice. If there's anything you need to improve on, it would have to be to try to expand on the gestures alittle more namely because its kind of hard to assume what the character was going through with his stiff movements. Music was also nice, so overall good job!

Dalas responds:

Thank you very much for your review SummerOlives!!
Ill try to improve on my works asap ^^
Thanks!