DevvyBoyOllie's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[KEEMSTAR and the Cummies]

It was okay. I like the art style, and I understood a good portion of the jokes and references. There were certain jokes that did feel a bit on the forced side however, but it was obviously in good fun overall so no big deal. Keep at it!

Chauder responds:

Thanks!

[Pyromane]

Are you sure this is your first attempt? Because this is pretty great stuff! The animation is fluid, I personally really like the art style, and there was clearly some deep meaning about life. Not sure if it was what you were shooting for but the meaning I received from this was that you should burn anything that has a MOUTH on it. Overall, good job!

ZeTrystan responds:

Yup! But I look at a lot of animation trying to understand how they are made, I'm sure it helped! :) Anyway, thanks a lot!

And this is exactly the meaning hidden in there. Those things with mouths, HUH, to the stake I say!

[Spoiler]

The joke was acceptable, I think you could've done abit more with it. However, your animation is improving and the audio quality was fairly good. Keep it up!

Chauder responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Helpful :D

[TUMOR: An Organic Glitch]

Well that was interesting! Now you have me curious about the upcoming parts, and how they will manage to piece this thing together.

ClockworkPixel responds:

be sure to check out newgrounds on friday then :D hopefully part 2 can keep you interested for part 3

[BQ - Nate Gets A Shield!]

The animation is crisp, well-drawn, and colorful. However, the dialogue is abit to juvenile constantly spitting out unfunny sex jokes that fail to bring in even a single chuckle throughout this short. Voice acting was also pretty wooden but not terrible. Overall, the short has potential although at it's current state, I'd say it's simply just watchable and nothing else.

BestQuest responds:

Appreciate the critique, we'll work on improving! Thanks for watching!

[SealSurfer Animation Test]

Not bad! I think with more time put into it you could have some pretty fluid animation overall.

BretLinne responds:

Thank you much. I believe this will come out nicely and will accent the title screen well.

[Just A Bit RealLife]

Can't really understand how it's a parody as the entire thing is merely a copy and paste of the original work only with your webcam frames in replacement. The frames are also pretty low quality, and overall this isn't new nor interesting. Not a very good start for your first submission.

maxdepier responds:

cause things aren't the same when the visual design changes , and you'r sorta right , it may not be a parody of Eddsworld but its a parody of animation itself , for when things get a more "real life" vibe , things can get a more weird or funny look , i'm interested in making it since really there is no one else who does the stuff i do ,
as for the low quality , i can't help it , i don't have the money to just buy a camera , and i'm not going to sit and do nothing , maybe one day in the future i'll get one...

[E-200]

One of my favorites from you so far. Solid animation, effective humor, and decent voice acting.

ThePivotsXXD responds:

But you gave it a 4 </3

[DAMIEN & DEZZ |EPISODE 1| CHICKEN GUN]

It has potential, however the short does contain a handful of small problems that effect the quality of this comedy.

Firstly, I think the animation is decent enough and the voice actors did a passable job along with the good audio quality. However, although this is the first episode of this possible mini-series, I think it would be beneficial if in Episode 2, the opening was a lot shorter namely that it takes up a good third of the episode and the credits takes up another. Dialogue, was also pretty forgettable for a comedy. That being said, I wish you the best of luck in future shorts and you do have potential to make something better.

Summarized:
+ Animation was decent.
+ Good Audio Quality.

+/- Voice Acting

- Opening/Ending was too long.
- The comedy lacks any noteworthy laughs.
- Ends alittle too soon, feels unfinished.

JComX responds:

Thanks for the feedback, yeah, for future episodes I'm definitely gonna leave out the huge theme song. :) and this whole thing is based on some shirt comics I made like 5 years ago, I hadn't got into the 'swing' of things quite yet. So I'll try to make sure future ones have more laughs and quotable things. :)

[Johnny Test Parody]

Johnny Test: Series Finale. Cooke Jar Entertainment, made all the stops on this with high budget animation, state of the art vocal acting, and a plot so convolutedly-beautiful, that Johnny Test will forever remain in our hearts for many years to come.

The parody is spot on and hilariously fun.

Update: 05/09/21 - Years later I still love revisiting this.

HellaGangbusters responds:

This is the best review I've ever had on anything I've made. I thank you for that.